Comic 1 - WhiteOut

10th Feb 2014, 12:41 PM
WhiteOut
Average Rating: 5 (6 votes)
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DizzasterJuice 12th Feb 2014, 6:12 PM edit delete
DizzasterJuice
Edited page - some people didn't like my original zombie, I guess zombies in whitey-tighties is a bit much. :)
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Stever 10th Feb 2014, 1:56 PM edit delete reply
Stever
Wow, great first page. So much more content then a typical comic page.
DizzasterJuice 10th Feb 2014, 3:04 PM edit delete reply
DizzasterJuice
Thank you very much!
I've always been a big fan of the large cinematic styles of comics such as Romantically Apocalyptic.
cattservant 12th Feb 2014, 9:23 PM edit delete reply
cattservant
At least the smell is on ice.
Songgu Kwon 13th Feb 2014, 4:57 PM edit delete reply
Songgu Kwon
Ha ha! Snow angel.
ATHENA SCULPTURE 22nd May 2014, 3:32 PM edit delete reply
ATHENA SCULPTURE
Wow great stuff. you might like my comic ,it's similar in some ways.
Tibbittz 18th Jun 2014, 8:06 PM edit delete reply
Tibbittz
Geez, next time you have a whole new comic out, TELL ME.

Great starting page. You're using captions well, something I can rarely say truthfully to anyone who is not Frank Miller.
DizzasterJuice 18th Jun 2014, 8:24 PM edit delete reply
DizzasterJuice
Thanks! That means a lot coming from you.
afraker 14th Jul 2014, 10:48 AM edit delete reply
afraker
Just found your comic. It's going to be fun reading. Your images are very entertaining.
DizzasterJuice 15th Jul 2014, 11:47 PM edit delete reply
DizzasterJuice
Thanks!
C.H. 24th Jun 2015, 10:49 PM edit delete reply
Page looks really good, the 'movie style' progression of panels gives it a nice sense of movement, so good job there.

The design of the suit is also well done, nothing too high tech, something that could theoretically be put together in an apocalyptic setting.

Also if she's out of bullets she can stab with her nipples....

My one real quibble: How did she draw the pistol? It came out of the shoulder holster on the same side as the hand she's using, that would be pretty much imposible unless she cross drew and then switched hands (which you can say she did, we dont know any different).

Looking forward to reading the series.
The Paleontologist 14th Mar 2016, 2:35 AM edit delete reply
First page, and already, the fourth wall has been broken. I like your style.
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